lunes, 25 de marzo de 2013

The Pudding like a night on the Sea

Oh my God! Huey I can't believe we have just done that! i shouldn't have obeyed you, are my little brother and i should remember you always do things wrong. I'm so anxious to hit you, but I can't.
I keep thinking and I'm so angry and I can't even tell it to you because father is going to discover us. Huey I wish you could read my thoughts so you could know how angry I 
am.

Now we are under my bed because you wanted to eat some stupid pudding. I have to recognize it tasted like heaven, oh it was so delicious. I can't distract my self, we are in big trouble.

Damn it Huey! What will happen to us now? Is father going to hit us? Is he going to find us? Oh Huey I hate you, please father forgive us if you find us. I'd better stop thinking in this, maybe I'm making some noise, Huey I will kill you if we survive this one. The best part is I will never tell you why!

1 comentario:

  1. Excellent work. You totally succeed at the task of transmitting this character´s tone. Your writing communicates desperation, confusion and guilt.
    Please remember to capitalise the letter "I" whenever it refers to the first person.
    Congratulations!
    Outstanding.

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